LI: To write about a charity.
Today I completed the last activtiy for day 1 of the summer learning journey. For this activity we had to chose a charity and write a short description of what they do. I chose OXFAM. OXFAM is a charity that helps countries that suffer from poverty get fresh water and other supplies. I enjoyed this activity.
Salam Farzana,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your blog post and observing your work that you have completed. I like how you added information about Oxfam and how people can help. Would you like to donate money to Oxfam one day?
Great blogging and Keep it up!
Greetings Farzana,
ReplyDeleteI have scrolled down your blogpost and found this amazing work. Was this activity hard? Do you enjoy doing these activity.
Keep the good work up!
Salam Farzana,
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is outstanding! I really love the way that you have set out your poster in terms of the colour and the way you have split up your paragraphs. I am super impressed with the way that you have written your sentences in your own words which I know is not an easy task! Please do remember to add the attributions for your images.This is when you say where you got your photos from. Here is the link if you don't know how.
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1VKjkMGwBrk2YI6Vtmg91OAQljr_T3ZSV6YZtu6MWFNM/edit#slide=id.g2c4e689b11_0_0
We give out full marks when you attribute your photos!
Just letting you know that after today I am going on holiday. I will be back again on the 6th of January to comment on your posts. Looking forward to seeing what amazing and wonderful blog posts you have done over the next few weeks!
Wishing you a happy holiday and a happy new year,
Mani
Hi Farzana!
ReplyDeleteThis activity you did was great, Great job for staying active with the Summer Learning Journey! What was the hardest part of this activity?
Blog you later!
~ Florence
Hi Farzana,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you described what OXFAM does, how we can help them and why we need to. I found it interesting that OXFAM sends food and clean water over to those who need it, would you join OXFAM?
Kia Ora Farzana! It was really easy to understand the information on your poster - you worded everything really well. I like what you've written in the last box for "How we can help" - use of language makes it sound really convincing/persuading. Oxfam sounds like a great organisation, and I'm glad people have chosen to talk about them. Great work!
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