I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Wednesday, 2 May 2018
Smart Commenting
LI. To write positive, thoughtful and helpful comments. This week for cyber smart we had to comment on 2-3 peoples blogposts. First we had to learn about the three words that will help us give advanced feed back to the creator, the words are: Postive, Thoughtful, and Helpful. We had to think of examples for commenting. Mr. Wong used Vayan's DLO for an example. When we did that Mr. Wong put our names on the board and chose 2-3 people for us to comment on. Everyone choose one person and Mr. Wong choose the rest. I had to comment on Xavier's DLO, Afatia's DLO, and Hinemoa's DLO. In the comment we had to have a greeting, making deep connections, something that you liked about someone's blogpost, questions, something helpful, and something nice at the end like Keep up the great work or Nice job.
Here is the links to their blogs-
Xavier's blogpost
Afatia's blogpost
Hinemoa's blogpost
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