Little boat recount commenting

LI. To find the mistakes of a recount.

This week for writing we had to go back to our little boat imaginative recount to comment on our writing work that we finished last week. I had to maake sure my writing features in my imaginative recount wich is....

1. First person
2. Past tence verb
3. Time connectives

I learnt how to make a good recount by using all these things. I learnt it by making sure that my recount makes sence.