LI. To write a descriptive scene. This week for writing we had to practise showing and not telling so, our stories can be descriptive. I tried my best to do this because I tell a lot. The tell part was easy for me so I did that part first. I wrote about that picture on the DLO. Mr. Wongs writing groups did a photo together and created a whole paragraph that was showing what the image was about.
I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Wednesday, 27 June 2018
Show and Tell | Descriptive writing
LI. To write a descriptive scene. This week for writing we had to practise showing and not telling so, our stories can be descriptive. I tried my best to do this because I tell a lot. The tell part was easy for me so I did that part first. I wrote about that picture on the DLO. Mr. Wongs writing groups did a photo together and created a whole paragraph that was showing what the image was about.
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